EijiSeishuu

be grateful, you have been given a new life

the beginning of the story is good but as the story continues all he thinks about is how to get women the story starts to decline. it's a shame I hope the mc will follow his goal from the beginning to the end and about women let it be natural and not the mc who tries to get them.

this not genius this is bullshit [img=thinking]

I just read 17 chapters and gave story development 3 stars and the rest 5 stars, because you forced him to change his personality with the force of the storyline and system. I hope you will continue with the initial MC personality because I was thinking "what will happen in the next storyline when fighting your enemy with such a personality and how to respond to the primitive thinking that only the strong can do anything in the cultivator world" so when I see the mc's personality being forced to change little by little it's a bit disappointing but I will try to continue reading this story *I hope there is nothing else that makes me disappointed*

a bit disappointing, I thought he would stick to his initial attitude and not change. I was hoping to see the storyline with his initial attitude, what the plot would be like in the future, but it's a shame that you forced him to adapt to the world of cultivators.

wtf itachi? not mc?

ok i skip this fanfic, i expect the MC to only have that one ability and improve it, instead of mixing all other people's abilities.

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in 1 day?seriously?

????????????????? what the fuck is this ??????????????????? skip