I can say you don't have a lot of editing to do within this story. Reading this so far has drawn me and wanting more. Only wish you can do a little bit more detail within your story and it would be even more amazing. Keep up the good work ^-^

Interesting O.O wonder how the character going to use it.

All you need is a great editor and this story would be amazing. Hope to read more .So please update 😁 Also hope everyone keeps supporting this novel 🙂 worth the read.

Hey everyone Author here. Dark Passion is my First every book I have written and hope you will fall in love with it. As much I love writing this story. Thank you for supporting my novel - Chev

Hey Panda, great novel see alot of potential. hope you continue writing and see where this novel take the reader. believe you need to get a little bit of feedback or second opinion. to help improve your novel.

great story. worth the read. keep up the good work [img=recommend] see alot more good story in your future. with a few things you need to work on, but other that it really amazing story.

I believe your a great writer. with a great start for a story. added your story to my collection of books. hope to see more of your stories. :)