TheGrandLabyrinth

Yeah, but the problem with having Sapphire reveal everything, even to a relatively trusted character without any impulse is that it makes it feel unnatural. Especially if it just ends up being an info dump where every bit of exposition is just piled on at that point. To make it work there needs to be an understandable reason why the Sapphire wants to of has to speak up. Its sort of how in cannon Blake only revealed that she was a member of the white fang because her emotions got the better of her.

Yeah, I get that. For me too this has gone on longer that I would have liked, but I also just don't want to end up like a lot of other stories on this sight and just gloss over character parts of the story and just skip to the 'fun' parts. Don't worry too mush though, this chunk is almost over, and the story will move on to something else.

:)

"Ninjas of Love" is what it was called, yes.

Tell me about it. I don't understand how people become early birds.

Translation: "I pledge my soul to the great goddess to grant me the power to slay all in my path."

Translation: "none shall survive the spider's wrath."

Translation: "all creatures shall be enthralled in our dark web."

Translation: "The night shadows within behind the mark of the ancients."

Translation: "we are the hunters of the universe,"