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Decent book read up to chapter 104. It’s getting a little repetitive though. It’s like time skip power up go do something followed up by some character interaction then another time skip etc. I thought there was supposed to be a system or something in this novel. Wasn’t he supposed to get a point per month or something like that mentioned at the start somewhere then later on it turns to using spirit stones for points but his talent points are mentioned twice in the whole book so far and one of the talents is beast taming but he hasn’t even tamed a beast yet. Yes he does have a dear as companion and later a fish but he didn’t use his talent on them to tame them. He just finished attacking a beast sect couldn’t he have captured a beast and used his talent on one? Now he is a foundation elder yet doesn’t go learn new skills in the sect like this is a huge miss in the story for his talent. He farming talent was mentioned that he increased it to 30 points I thought and that would normally translate to 300 times farming speed but it still at 50 times. I get the feeling that the author forgets what’s mentioned a few times or doesn’t have a good grasp of where to go with the story. There is room for improvement in this story but I would give it a 6 out of 10 so far. I hope these things can be fixed in the future or have someone go over the story for inconsistency and improvements.
I hope the mc can keep the hatred he has and not go all soft. At the very least kill the brothers. Don’t usually see stories go this route though.
Good story so far about 40 chapters in. My question is this going to be incest with his mom?
Is there going to be incest?
I remember there was a chapter after the system leveled up and it showed his stats that he now had room for 25 students?
The evil repelling talisman can’t he make it himself and how come they cost 1 mid grade when I coast 1 inferior grade before. I think you named the talisman wrong. Isn’t it the golden something he used to defend against the snake what you meant to say?
The constant gender mistakes are annoying. Started back with Claire now Milky please no more it’s a simple thing to remember and fix.
13 year old drinking wine and your whole description of her makes it sound like an older person, someone at least as old if not older then the MC. The way she talks is almost more mature then a 13 year old would talk.
Your story is reallly similar to super gene. From the teleporting to another world to the first soul he gets the levels of genes and needing to eat to get stronger etc. so far there is little difference in the two stories and super gene has something like 3000 chapters.