Ryuusei369

is this harem?

Author-san,take your time. It's very rare to find a good sports themed novel. So readers like me will definitely wait for you.

I like the concept but author-san you need to do some serious editing so that the readers would stick with this

Wouldn't his family and friends notice his sudden changes? Or is the plot armour taking care of it for him?

Thanks for clarifying that. I was surprised at the inconsistencies between former and later chapters. You are right in the fact that MC doesn't mistreat women and doesn't consider them romantic interests. But all the powerful female characters introduced so far are either mesmerized by his looks, power or both and have romantic inclinations towards him. I find that a bit disappointing. Why can't a female character find him powerful and just admire him? Why the need for them to fall in love and follow along like puppets? I also find the lack of male characters(who are not villains or admirers) concerning. Why can't the MC take on a male apprentice? While I am glad you have many powerful female characters(compared to most), we need similarly powerful male characters too... Otherwise even if it is not a harem, it gives the ambience of one. I hope you don't find my review offensive. I just feel strongly on the subject.

This is a harem novel. Just not a harem of professors.

This is a harem novel. Just not a harem of professors.

This is a harem novel. Just not a harem of professors.

I read the first 39 chapters and was disappointed by how the author managed to ruin what could have been quite a promising story. So I decided to skip ahead and read the ending and it is a harem. The annoying female character introduced in the beginning is one of MC's lovers. He has 3 wives? partners? The author has a habit of writing pathetic female characters making me wonder about the kind of person they are... I feel so offended by the portrayal of women. So I am dropping this novel.

I fear that the author is going to make her the FL....