RuinSmith

the author puts in random filler and skips major events. with repeating things and unnecessary side chats that ramble on for half the chapters, I thought that it would get better, but it's gotten worse to the point that it's killed my urge to read it

pointless shit chapter again

what is the point of this chapter it means nothing to the story

The story is alright. I was hoping for a more stable update on it, but he hasn't updated in 2 weeks.

The chapters are becoming repetitive

you called it a mushroom last chapter now you're calling it a grass

you really need a better editor to catch the incongruent labeling of cultivation levels

It's good for the first 100 chapters. Even though it's got grammar issues and drags on with explanations, I could still enjoy it. But after that, it gets convoluted with 3rd party stories that feels like unnecessary filler. it stays like this for 100 chapters with atleast 40 of them having nothing to do but give worthless filler that gives nothing to the plot.

Guys, I tried to stick with it, but the problems with gender consistency, cultivation stages, forgetting about, then adding in rewards from the system, and the inconsistency of the rules he put in have turned this into a hot mess. This writer needs a better editor and translator to go through and check the work.

The writer needs a better translator with inconsistent genders and realms it's a hard read.