RuinSmith

The story is alright. I was hoping for a more stable update on it, but he hasn't updated in 2 weeks.

The chapters are becoming repetitive

you called it a mushroom last chapter now you're calling it a grass

you really need a better editor to catch the incongruent labeling of cultivation levels

It's good for the first 100 chapters. Even though it's got grammar issues and drags on with explanations, I could still enjoy it. But after that, it gets convoluted with 3rd party stories that feels like unnecessary filler. it stays like this for 100 chapters with atleast 40 of them having nothing to do but give worthless filler that gives nothing to the plot.

Guys, I tried to stick with it, but the problems with gender consistency, cultivation stages, forgetting about, then adding in rewards from the system, and the inconsistency of the rules he put in have turned this into a hot mess. This writer needs a better editor and translator to go through and check the work.

The writer needs a better translator with inconsistent genders and realms it's a hard read.

let me be honest this one drops off between chapters 60 and 70. I don't know what to say, but there are huge gaps in this story and I can pass some of them up as character progression but when you leave a chapter as him dying and then jump to the next chapter skipping how he survived it makes it tuff to read.

It started of alright even with a few contradictions but the writing went down hill after 50. It says he is a farmer but doesn't have any farming skills, he doesn't even attempt to plant any herbs, and he eve has a slave workers but doesn't give them any work to do. He uses the farms as a sare space and a storage device then as a farm. The author can't even stay consistent with power levels and just randomly assign them, he forgets that he has the mc kill a sanctuary expert in front of the student body but then has him fight a legendary after telling him that there's a huge gape between the two. I give it a hard pass with poorly written plots and the author not being able to remember or maybe to lazy to double check what he had written.

Unfortunately this turned into a terrible harem buider that is constantly poorly written with terrible grammar. the world was interesting at first but its just another clone that has turned into smutt