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It’s a good story but the translations quality has taken a sharp dive compared to the first novel. Furthermore, a lot of phrases are used that is different than the previous novel. Hopefully the translator repudiates all the translation mistakes. For example: teacher origin is called primordial ancestor, yuan, primordial yuan. It keeps changing the name multiple times throughout the story. And it’s not just this character, other characters also suffer the same problem.

Is it me or is the level of translation and the uses of the phrases very different from IEatTomatoes other novels. Furthermore, I re-read swallowed star 1 and It’s very obvious that the translation and uses of phrases here is different than the original novel.

Here is one thing I always felt not explained in novels. When a person is reborn as a baby, how the hell does now his parents are giants or if they are 10 meter or 100 meters. It doesn’t make sense since as a baby everything is f*cking giant. Therefore, I believe there should be a reference that compares their heigh to a tree or other animals, atleast something so that it makes since.

It’s a great story and I really enjoyed it. However, I think it should be a bit fast paced in my opinion as if it goes on slowly explaining the world he is currently in like the rest of the novels, it would remove the whole point of him reincarnating in different world after he dies. Moreover, I feel like the author should drop a hint or two in the worlds he’s gonna reincarnate about why him and his friends are going through this reincarnation thing like what’s the whole point other than them becoming stronger, also I feel that a great antogonist should be introduction that’s against them reincarnating.

I really loved the story, specifically with JJK powers. However, it would be much better if you add more dept to the villains and sorrounding character in the story. This would give it more life and I’m definitely sure that other people would also like it. @mr.author However, it’s been a week since you last updated and was wondering if you dropped the novel as it would be such a shame.

The story is way to confusing. I feel like it’s a great story but it’s very hard to understand and it confuses the shit out of you

This is a wonderful hidden gem amongst the novels in WebNovel. I really recommend to readers who like novels that authors actually put effort in writing unlike some novels where the biginning is good but later on it’s the same story over and over again. This novel always makes makes you keep guessing what’s gonna happen and keeps you edge. Recommendation for Author: Try to improve the grammatical mistakes in the novel. Add characters who are actually honest or loyal and good. I understand that the story is based on the unfairness in the world but at the end of the day I feels like the MC could need some characters that are actually nice or loyal and honest. Someone he can consider as a friend and not be suspicious about.

Alright fair enough, not Turkish but it’s just the way Turkish people were treated looked like it was more of a hate towards the religion. That’s why I thought It was islamaphobia

I really like the novel but there is a lot of Islamaphobia in it. I don’t get why do people have to be racist towards religion while writing a novel. It’s just stupid as I feel like they would lose a certain audience when they do this.

I’ve read multiple novels that had elements of racism in it but this.. this takes the cheery on the top. It is the most racist novel I’ve read till date and I don’t think there could be another novel with this much racism. Black people are called gorillas, and most natives population are just labor force that are killed. Except the white people, I think the author has a personal vendetta against all the other races such as Asian, black and Arabs and is extremely racist towards those race. With all this racism and the why the Fu*K is this novel so expensive with chapter costing 16 coins. In order to read this novel you have to spend like 15k coins which is insane.