DaoistReturn

These interactions with mc and his mother feel kinda dry. Doesn't feel like a conversation with 2 different people but with the mc and himself.

Thanks for the chapter!

ty

Thanks for the chapter!

It was good, definitely looking forward to more chapters. Only complaint I have is that is was too damn short and I need more chapters. Keep up the good work.

After staring (respectfully) at the cover art for a short (extremely long) time I finally noticed a typo 'Leveing'

thanks for the chapter

ty

Thanks for the chapter. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!