CarefeeDaoist

There is nothing wrong with the fantasy element but shouldn’t you stop making people stupid?

Author are you perhaps retarded?

Sigh these authors must really be losers to write something like this

Why doesn’t this have more likes?????

I felt like I read another fanfic with the exact same story

If you worked for the government and knew or done things that could get you and your family killed if they accidentally mention it. Would you tell them?

Oh so it’s the second chapter and he’s already invincible…. well at least I wasted 5 minutes of my life

Is this guy stupid? He is a voice in your head how can he do anything

Thanks for the heads up

It’s a novel called The Ultimate Evolution you can read it on here. It’s a novel that reads like a fanfic pretty decent