Linnor

no problem, i have read a lot fan fic about hunter exam. and most of the fanfic got dropped after 4rd exam. i hope you can keep continue the story and finish it. thx for the chapter

please dont drop this story. i like the story so far. i like how MC playing with girls innocent. please update!!! i need more[img=update][img=update][img=update]

well i think you need to stick with the story so far about slice of live romance. dont fokus about future harem and dont put in fantasy story or powerful woman in the harem. just make it like normal life. if he get power or sistem or become non human the story will get more complicated. it will make the story harder for you to write. thank for the the good story so far. keep the hard work[img=recommend]

please make the devil fruit have unique power. that make your fan fic different than the other fan fic. thank for the chapter

it still the same

thank for the chapter. what year when goku come to earth? is it still far?

where the chapter?

kwkwkwkwk it was really funny. thanks for the chapter

the chapter is not complete bro! please fix it. thx

well, how about make MC more smart. he dont need to help fisher tiger to escape because he can do it alone. make boa 3 sister fall in love with him because his kind to them. well they are still kid when they got captured so it not to hard to there trust.