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Much appreciated, I'll keep going! (HP+1)
Glad to hear that we could come to a common ground. As for the NPC romance, maybe it will come in the future arcs as we're now quite heavily focused on the 'Grind' (Slaying Goblins, Trolls, Orcs and whanots) Once MC settles down to take a breather, it might as well be the time for me to sprinkle some romance, a bit of NSFW stuff too.
Repost -rewrite.
Maybe I pull the trigger. I'm iffy about harem 50/50. But since its mixed with Brave New World, you might get some leeway.
backstory change, nothing so major.
Indeed.
What I can only do is encourage you to continue reading the following chapters. While it's true that in this rewrite for Saharan Successor I have cut short the journey to him becoming a Black Knight and possibly a Red Knight, but it's with good reasons. You wouldn't feel good with yourself reading idk, 100 chapters of him building everything up then suddenly lose all his progression. At least, myself, if I would be put in a reader's perspective, I wouldn't want that. It feels as if you've stolen something from me. It will get better. I vouch, that this rewrite will be better (is better) than the first manuscript of SS or Midnight.
Not a wrong analogy.
Tailors can be powerful. Especially if they have a second class (let's say Mage or Necromancer) since they can craft their own Cloth Armors with special effects.