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Morty756483

Morty756483

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2018-04-22 UnidoSpain
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    Thanks for the chapter, I really like this style more, chapters 14-18 were obviously written with AI and were unbearable to read.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: The Decaying Hyuga Clan
    Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
    Anime e quadrinhos · INeedRest
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    You changed the style of translation in this chapter, it became worse, more poetic to fill the words’ count

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Colt in Shisui's Words, Meeting Itachi
    Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
    Anime e quadrinhos · INeedRest
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    Dialogues are amazing. 10/10

    Ch 5 5: This War is Mine
    SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)
    Filmes · EmmaCruzader
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    The style oc writing is too poetish, you can remove 80% of adjectives from this chapter and the text will improve significantly. This should be a light novel not a poem from 18th century

    Ch 2 Chapter 0.2 - Prologue
    Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
    Fantasia · Darkness_Enjoyer
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    Great chapter, the only thing I would have changed - how quickly she accepted this dimensional shop, I would have believed to the last moment that it’s a part of the game or Akihiba’s plot

    Ch 25 Chapter 25
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Livros e literatura · SenseiCaffeine
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    The security of this castle is sure advanced, I think if we gather all paragraphs related to the castle security it will pile into a whole chapter

    Ch 35 Chapter 35
    Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord
    Anime e quadrinhos · GreenBlue17
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    Who is enforcing these taxes? Who is collecting entry feez? There are no guards in the city

    And there was passing tax, childbirth tax, wheat toll tax, marrying wife tax… Anyway, several noble city lords changed the laws to exploit the people.
    Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord
    Anime e quadrinhos · GreenBlue17
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    And yet, he chose to live in New York

    But alas, he failed to find his footing in this new world. He was powerless, not a single power to speak of. He wasn't a mutant nor was he blessed with a system that he could level up with. He was ordinary, like everyone around him.
    Marvel: I am Sukuna
    Anime e quadrinhos · Andrew_Basnet
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    What a bad chapter, is MC 10 y.o. mentally?

    Ch 13 Crazy Woman = Yandere??
    Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer
    Anime e quadrinhos · AgentMonke
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    Small idea for the future trading - he could propose to the whole race/kingdom/organization to sign a contract with all their members - in their death, everything they had would belong to him, or just their talent orbs. In return, he is obliged to return 1, 2 or 3 orbs of the highest quality back to the organisation and can keep the rest. This way he will get a lot of talent orbs, although of lower quality, and orgs in case of death of their talents would be able to nurture new ones fast using these high quality orbs.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Livros e literatura · SenseiCaffeine
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    That’s not how Wisdom path works. Usually when they deduce somehing, if it’s beneficial, they will share the information right away, or hide it for their own benefits.

    "I understand that you might be curious Xuanyuan, but reading fate and predicting the future is an extraordinarily difficult achievement. Being aware of the future, can result in ripples occurring that should never have happened. If you know the future, then there are chances that things can change, and events that should happen, may never end up happening. Is this understood Xuanyuan?".
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    Go join Heavenly Court then

    "If they fear that they might be left behind, then they will desperately try to follow me. If they see me try to ascend, they too will push themselves further, similarly desiring to ascend. If I desire the Truth, then no doubt others will join me in my search. The Ancient Soul Sect is my home, and if I lift myself up, I will lift it up along with me. And because well..."
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    Totally understandable why he wants it, maybe it’s even worth trying, but actually getting it is impossible in my opinion. All venerables already betted on Fang Yuan

    Xuanyuan knew that his greed could lead him down the Demonic Path. But Xuanyuan knew that without an immense amount of luck, extraordinary attainment in both his main Path and sub Path, powerful killer moves, strong and loyal allies, and the right timing, he would never be able to compete with Fang Yuan for the Sovereign Fetus Immortal Gu.
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    MC is giving off very strong Fang Zheng vibes at the start of RI, minus the desire to become a venerable

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 I shall become Venerable
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    Interesting development

    "You don't just produce Shadow Thoughts! You're not Shadow Thoughts Gu! You're Shadows As Thoughts Gu! You can turn Shadows into Thoughts!".
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    Actually good answer, Fang Yuan didn’t know whap path to take until he became Peak Rank 8

    "I have absolutely no idea".
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    Blood path increased attainment??

    Blood Path, Dream Path, Theft Path, and Soul Path were perhaps the most effective methods of increasing attainment in a short period of time. Unfortunately, three paths of the four Paths were ruled by Venerables, two of which weren't exactly dead.
    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bruhdamante
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    Still kinda strange seeing this after everything he did on this island before

    'Troublesome,' he thought as he left them for now in the cells, while leaving orders for them to be taken care of.
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Livros e literatura · SenseiCaffeine
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    Yeah, solid logic

    Can't worry about whether they are good or bad if they are trying to kill him. He had to worry about himself first.
    Sussy Baka in MHA
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    In hero academy it would be just a normal Tuesday

    So, he had decided to make use of his Sus powers only and only in cases of extreme emergency. 
    Sussy Baka in MHA
    Anime e quadrinhos · The_Synonym
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