General_Paragon

Joke? This thing is an absolute mess from every level you want to look at it. Grammar, writing style, narration, plot progression, characterization.. .

I'm absolutely fine thank you for the thought, but if you really like this work, I can't say anything else but you have horrible tastes.

I agree

Agreed

*I love the smell of napalm in the morning*

if I was god, I wouldn't be here working with cement now, would I?

abyss magic has three different kinds of concepts, you can pick which one to use: Nether magic Forbidden spells(The ones with double-edged spells but op) and Eldritch magic You can go to Powerlisting.fandom.com for more info, it can definitely describe how the stuff works better than me. Usually, what you are looking for goes by different names, so check out as much as you can.

as the author, I say that this novel doesn't deserve 5 stars at all. From the start to the end, it is just a series of awkward-looking chapters

agree

That's bull, and I know it more than anyone else here. The fanfics I made are all so fucking bad, I can't help but throw the phone after reading even a chapter of them.