It was kinda normal at first, not boring but not bad as well. The grammar needed work though. The problem is this whole envy thing. Not only is this really stupid, like thinking the earth is flat stupid, this is also inconsistent with his character so far. He could have had a number of would be loyal assistant from konosuba alone. It's weird that he's so obsessed on getting envy. Anyway, I'm not the kind of guy who forces my views on people. If I don't like it, it's on me. So yeah, keep writing but I'm out.

You can just turn it into a mixed world. Berk is only a part of the world, you can recreate the parts of the world into something more. For example, the anime Claymore is in an island as well. There are ton of yoma (demon like creatures) in there. Akame ga Kill's setting is in a continent plague with danger beasts where they use parts of those same beast into making weapons called teigu. Heck! You can even involve One piece and Naruto hahahaha!

Sooooooo... Does China exist here too??? Cause he said Chinese formula hahahahahaha!!! 🤣

I don't get why you keep saying spatial awareness. Do you even know what spatial awareness is? It's being aware of space. Having the intelligence or intuition to judge the space between things. Like how far a ball from you. Is this a Chinese ff translation? Cause your English does not compute. It's like the term in Chinese ff where they always call transmigration as time travel.

Tell me you're a Karen without telling me you're a Karen

Please turn his shadow Jutsu into a meliodas' demon power

Ugh! Please at least watch the freaking show before rating. Did you even ask yourself why he's not travelling a world willy nilly?? It's a freaking movie about a guy basically killing every jealous ex his gf has. No authorities nor consequences at all. And let's not forget how powerful some of the exes are. One of them is basically Goku hahahaha! What a Karen!

It's a little coincidental how the mc is a lot like the original Rick Castle in his mannerisms and John has a bit too easy of a time getting over his wife who just a month or two ago but other than that the story is spot on. The delivery is good without sacrificing the funny parts and the broody parts. Good job. [img=recommend]

Too complicated. I just took a massive dump and I can't be bothered to analyze his explanation. Op sword with many forms, that's that for me hahahaha!

https://www.mtlnovel.com/arms-dealers-from-hogwarts/chapter-101/

Nevermind, I found it. There's over 300 chapters there. Such a waste to drop

Can you at least tell us the original title

Wow! This is the first time I read an ambitious fanfic that can actually pull it off!! It's 7 chapters and the mc has not been a pathetic beta nor douchebag alpha despite how problematic his situation is. The grammar is surprisingly good as well. Not formal enough to lose any realism and formal enough not to sound like it was mtl'ed. If had to nitpick about a problem, it's how lucky for the mc to get an awesome Gacha right at the start. Despite looking like normal Gacha powers or skills, the items he got are an op starting set. Just with the universal energy conduit and the spear proficiency, he'll op af since it was the same thing Yu Ilhan started with after the thousand years he spent purely honing himself to perfection. (He also trained with subclasses like blacksmithing but his spear proficiency was what made op) And with the universal energy conduit he'll be able to adapt anywhere. It means, wherever he goes, if he can have something like magic he can later create something passive that can defend against that. (Magic resistance) If he can get chakra, he can get something passive that can defend against that. (Truth seeking ball) And since he knows the story of those worlds, he can just directly find a way to get them after all, the most difficult part is knowing a path and be assured it works. It means although there's a calamity, there's a golden path laid out. He just have to humble himself without losing self respect to the members and survive by working hard even though the world is panicking all around him. And if you haven't guessed it by now, I'm loving reading this hahahahaha!!

Do Fall Out Boy next 😆

Welcome back!!!

She doesn't act or react like a guy. Her actions sounds more like a manipulative gf. Even gay guys have this mannerisms in them that tells people that they were once male. Ava, is kind of eerie cause I can't imagine the mc ever being a guy. It's like the author has never experienced being a guy.