Naavis

amazing start lukewarm development Absolutely underwhelming ending good read to pass time but disappointing in the end nonetheless

the north american lich!?!?!??

lost any interest in reading your story after seeing how childish you could be, also your grammar is a clear turnoff

The mf didn't even grammer* check the comment he put on this novel.

I loooove protein shake, I love protein shake too *ad*

chad rat

torobayo

If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy. Writing quality is deplorable. That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice. Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it. To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes. cheers

el burro al ultimo, mal ahí