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kreader1111

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2018-03-06 UnidoGlobal
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    kreader11118 months ago
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    It 's a decent read. Lots of content available. World building felt pretty solid and fleshed out. Story is developing and has potential. Most of the characters are well written. My main issue is with the MC. It's like he gets the most story time but the least emotional development of all of the characters. Many chapters in, and he is still very much an out-of-touch teenager that struggles with his insecurities. His sense of justice is very skewed and relatively confusing. The moral dilemmas that he's faced has NOT given him much maturity at all. It's also a tough read when he struggles as he is not a graceful struggler (compared to say Adonis). He feels and remains overall toxic and emotionally stunted. The otherworlders in Adonis' group, in comparison, feel more relatable and dynamic. They grow from their experiences and it shows in their dialogue and actions. When I read their sections, it feels like I'm reading about young adults, not teenagers. This basically results in a static MC that has become increasingly difficulty to root for after hundreds of chapters. As this novel leans into tropes, it's pretty ironic as well that MC (as the OP Extra) feels more like a puppet vs his enigmatic rival (who feels like he should be the Extra)... Just my opinions. Thank you to the Author for giving me content to consume and hopefully my mind gets changed in the future chapters.