dadaoist

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I agréé with the edit. I don t think it added anything interesting.

it get colder until it get hotter. I think the lower is 10 km After that it begin to get hotter.

Really good story. Original idea about cyberpunk. Plz go on !

Otto could find letters from his father. Letters at this time were kept a long time. The hightower must have spies within the maesters. Thé letters could come from them.

a northen lady, an oc, even a freefolk!

nice story. About the exchange of money between muggle and magical world, there must be product that are both valued by wizard and muggle alike. Lands, gold, food,... if he can exchange money he can sell products.

1000km^2 is around thé surface area of the city of New York. He has a really small lordom. Before you can say size don' t matter, that only smth petty lords say.

Not really. most of ancient culture knew the earth as round. Which make the flat believers even more dumb. Sailor know of earth curvature by watching boat crossing the horizon

could be nice, certainly better than hanako