Msilver

Woke nonsense garbage

No, I would say Perfect role for MC would be Ramsay Snow

This is not Original it's translation from Russian fanfic called "Наруто - Тень водоворота" Author's name: Zang . There are seven parts of this story, first one is more than 10 years old. All text on this fic is free and fully available.

Yeah, I see it now, but without the context, it look odd, I mean to me as reader she was sent to investigate conspiracy and clear name of mage accused of treason that also dirt the Schools name as a whole when their own is traitor. So getting more evidence is way to go. Now if they were planning to kill king and take control anyway there is no need for evidence indeed. But it was not clear before hand.

I say that character and their interaction is very well written. They feel alive, first after sex interaction, does not look like it is from medieval time, but from our, "I took advantage of you?" I just can't imagine that Witcher of all people will say that, remember that you said yourself that MC is a Witcher that have some part of SI, not SI himself. The other thing is, like I said character interaction, characters themself look good, very good to me, language also quite pleasant, the thing story lacks in my opinion, is "meat" and consistency. Meat is surroundings description, there are no Aura or Feeling to what happens. It's like imagen TV-show, with excellent actors, nice plot, good acting, but everything that around Actors is white, like there nothing there and it's does not matter. Farewell had nice tone to it though and more full picture In original there were jumps from story to story with no connection at first and not consistent timeline, but I to me it looked as weakest part of series. Your time jumps looks to sudden and "story" betwin them to short. In original those short stories were more like full episodes of Geralt life. In your story because lack of details it look more like slideshow comparing to original. Don't get me wrong story is good I do like it, it just my thoughts of it so far.

Is it not more logical to take him alive so he could testify, it not like there are video recording that can proof without shadow of debout of what he said. If you want clear someone's name you need all the proof you can get.

As far as I remember Witchers started to deviated of their duties after Schools were destroyed, like Cat schools for example, they were the only ones infamous to take contracts for humans not monsters. It is possible for Witchers to do this, but seems less likely to happen before Schools were destroyed.

Thank you!