Liboedaois

Good novel, good choice to read .....................................................................................................................................................................................................

Nice book mate

For me, your novel is very good and detailed, but I think you could add more depth to the interactions between the various characters, making the characters look more alive. and his insight is too opportune in my opinion, he can understand martial arts without any foundation in martial arts. At least you have to make him have the basics, such as stacking martial arts books, to make better martial arts.

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Doorrings

Good choice of story I hope you Will finish this book .................................................................................................................,............................

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