Zabne123

Overall, this is a good read. I enjoy reading game novels. The Mc is pretty intuitive and innovative when it comes to magic. He is also pretty innocent to the world, showing his young age. It could be bad depending on the situation, but it's nice sometimes to see as long as it's not too much. Too much innocence is just stupidity. He has a few moments in the later chapters that are close to that, but things work out in the end. There has been some good story building going on that allows you to see some interesting potential future paths to take. I look forward to reading more

I've read 55 and it has some really good potential but the Mc needs some honest work. I also don't see where this story is going. The story lost sight of the first villain. The Mc for me is too passive when it comes to dealing with people. He seems smart but no real goals are shown yet. I feel this needs some work. Like I said it's has potential to go far. The first 20 chapters really pulled me in.

raped and nothing happened*

That's it? Jack, I feel is too passive. He almost got unjustly arrested and Lena was almost taken to be rated and noting really happens? This Mc needs to grow some bigger balls

Honestly, I'm not sure what the plan is for these 2 women, but whatever it is, it's not worth it. It just makes the situation annoying. It also doesn't help that the Mc has no balls when it comes to them. I really hope this changes

So far, for a new novel, it seems like a good read. It's still too early to tell anything substantial about the mc's character. At most, I can say that he doesn't seem too ignorant, and he seems to catch on quickly. So far the Mc seems like he will be op and as long as he is smart about it I think this book will go far.

we all know what the Mc is going to pick but for once an author actually has the Mc think about his options and what such actions will do to affect his life and who is in it. He still did it but it's the thought that counts lol. Thanks for chapter

is gold for real after platinum, or was that a mistype

Thanks for the chapter.

thank you for the chapter. can you pls put the " for when they are talking.