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if the power was like you said , if you can sustain for seconds (S) you alread one punch man in dxd.... but i dont thing is seconds, more like instant death ... you and the world goes with you
how to build a shelter slice of life... chap 74 and nothinng of apocalypse .... ............................................................................. a apocalypse story without apocalypse and maybe i'm wrong but atlast 90% of the construction is wrong ( timing ) things are too fast i'm waiting the start of apocalypse to read again .... i stoped on chap 47 i think . now i just read the titles theres nothing new.
i stoped reading at chap 44 ... on start was good... but the fic was so without flavor that lost my drive to read this is a story about how to build a bunker and thats that theres nothing more, i dont know if my expectative as too much , but my deception was off the charts
why is so hard to find apolypse fanfics on this site... cant find on search search > Apocalypse , doenst show everything . search > Doomsday doenst show everything. i lost the name of another apocalypse that freeze earth .... if someone coult help me with how to search eficient i would apreciate
i dont know if is a fanfic. or original ... but is good! until chap 52 is good... theres some mistakes like: timidy insects ( insects are not like that , see a ant who goes to hunt food theres not thing as a fear in insect ) Animals doenst break in houses for food. ( if animals goes especif to hunt humans , theres no need to fear humans animore. so they will break inside house to hunt humans for food ) some info doenst show like > whats the power of the 9.5 girl she did eat a purple fruit ... but overall is good please continue
pasticcio for those who dont know and had to search like me > is a lasagna with noodle's
why not use warrior phisic ... 2 m tall . dragon ball kind of phisic
its like the story of the tiger and donkey again ...
oh and btw i like douluo world as fanfic... atleast i can understand the powers . its not a scale of power absurd like against the gods that you can pinch planets e destroy everything with a fart but i'm not so delusional that i cant see douluo is a extreme weak compared with other cultivation worlds