Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs a bit of work and the story feels very dry. Characters feel really dry too, it's just a very... dry story. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.

Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, too many run-on sentences, and the story feels dry. Paint dries faster than your story progresses.

Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, sentence structure feels weird, and the story feels clunky. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.

You discord nerds, I'm still the tler