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Great story, I wonder what his leg up is gonna be... Though I hope he reaches the peak of cultivation. ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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At least give him a little cheat

Good story I like it. Though since he does'nt have a golden finger cultivations gonna be pretty slow.... Dont give him a golden finger, but increase the pace of his cultivation by having a hidden talents that good but not op.

I have a feeling that his dad is a lovecraftian god

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How long more until he gets his POWERS!!!!!

u killed jar jar HOW COULD YOU?!! He may have been annoying but HE WAS GOOD COMEDY RELIEF.

You should turn ur protag into a villian its so fun when they are

I LOVE YOUR STORY gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

Seriously you made this fic where hes going to fight the being who gave him his powers... thats such bull i want a power fantasy where there no garbage plot devices.

Is he a cannibal or does he drink blood?

LIKE holy no one likes reading about side characters

GIVE ME SOME RAIJIN ACTION GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Can you mess with wizarding Britain more, i like seeing them run around not knowing what to do

U should give him the skill gamers mind gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

u better not make him go back to his world. stay in the new world

why would you bother joining the song family? Ur literally gonna be a omniversal emperor theres no point