Sorry I meant Azazel I just got confused (due to excessive similarity indeed :P).

So... basically far worse than the average fanfic protagonist with just a couple of years' worth of system rewards on his shoulders, I see I see! :P xD

Come on dude so much effing exposition in this chapter I fell asleep halfway through -_-"

Says the guy that complained about not wanting to exercise since he was a month old despite having lived for almost 30 years in an almost fully crippled body!?! Shouldn't he be jumping around trying all kinds of movements and techniques and whatnot just for the sake of it, let alone self improvement? I call author's self inflicted plot hole to keep the MC powerlevel down.

Yeah.. I'll join the bandwagon of the ppl utterly disappointed that the MC has such a weak starting point, especially with World travel on the table from chapter 1. Oh well, I guess I kinda called it, I just had a bit higher expectations since the cheat he got was not useless, but the author had to go and make him have lesser qualifications that Ajuka, go figure.. -_-"

They wouldn't even suggest that given that Azrael is very much alive, around, and famous. Bad call.

And I thought that sneaking viruses into newborns was his lowest point..! D:

Phew.. I was expecting this to be far, far worse than this, dodged a bullet by not getting anything actively negative I guess!

I hope that you are implying that this is a showcase of how this particular author can't write an OP from the start MC because if your comment refers to ME being the one who can't handle OP MC, then you probably can't even tell the left from the right because if reading FanFic was not a waste of time, I would have been granted 7 degrees in it with 3 majors into OP MCs alone by now given how many OP MC fanfics I've red in my life, and my comment was the exact critique of how this author is building said future OP MC completely wrong, starting from contradicting his own first life principles of caution and steady training.

How can they join the Interhigh if they don't even know what sport are they going to be interested in playing by the time the competition comes around? Can you at least make sure to not break the logic and consistency of the story by just tossing whatever comes to your mind onto the page without actually reviewing it first please (like going to the OPM verse without preparation)?

The way you worded this reward when you first introduced it made it sound like he could travel back and forth endlessly between the 2 Worlds, so why would it look like a single use item now? I hope its just a matter of deceiving appearances..

How could Saitama beat the giant bird monster without his powers? Are you writing fanfiction or fanfiction of fanfiction? What is this nonsense.. -_-"

That's what I've been thinking all along, how stupid you have to be to simply pick up and jump into the One Punch Man universe with no special powers or even training whatsoever, I mean his base body can't even handle a taxing jug around town, and this guy randomly waltz in a World where towering monster kaijus that raze cities to the ground on a daily basis randomly appear.. like OK author I understand that World travelling sounded cool in your mind, but not having the MC be fully prepared, trained and everything for several years or at the very least, for a good training montage first, was simply moronic to the extreme and I do not accept it, regardless of the book's nature being light-hearted or not, there is such a thing as logic, and you showed less than zero for a character that seemed to plan and act so meticulously through its entire first life so far. Big, big mistake.

What kind of nonsense is this guy doing for no reason, how did he even end up in another universe to begin with? And this farce of the energy reset that needs to be reactivated? Get out of here you hack. -_-"

Alright, let's add imaginary progression barriers to the mix, why not! -_-"

I find it funny how an author can at the same time make up such "astonishing" descriptions for the MC's powers while still binding him to such nonsense issue like the cancer cells, sure thing mate, the guy has a body that is literally in harmony with heaven and earth, but cancer though..

OK nonsense BS unnecessary urgency mechanism confirmed for the majority of the book, classic trash move from a CN fanfic author, still, I was expecting them to be better than that for some reason.

Btw the fact that he has almost 50% of what is supposed to be a "Sun God" and the "Will of the Earth" his body is unbelievably beyond weak if he can't even overcome a few cancers here and there, wouldn't you say? Author going way too far with their forced urgency side plot to keep the MC on his toes and moving, its getting annoying, mostly because it doesn't really make sense that his body doesn't naturally overcome it.

Oh wow, this took quite the unexpected and unwelcome turn for someone that is not into Minecraft D: let's see of the overall picture will be enough to overcome this hurdle or if we'll have to part ways prematurely.

I do indeed complain on almost every book (you could say that's just as much my hobby as it is reading) but I usually only wring each author once on average, not much of a point hammering on an already bent nail.