dan7cor

This is the best lord territory novel that I have read at the moment the pace is perfect, there are obstacles to overcome, the MC has the right amount of power to keep you invested in his growth, he uses his power in smart ways which most authors don't use, he is not the type of OP MC where he is good at everything without even trying his strength makes sense, the characters are interesting and you enjoy the interactions between them with MC and each other. With so many boring novels on this platform, this is a rare gem

this is a good quote

400 years is too little time for all of this galactic empires to have appeared

so this is the utopia my racist neighbor always wanted?

yeah, this is gonna be a fast paced novel, so here is where I drop it

this is really cringe, everything else was great, but this annoyed me

so, she did oral right after losing her Virginity? yeah this shows author has never taken anyone's virginity

dear author, you mentioned the book was starting to lose support, I have some ideas why this might be happening in my opinion as a reader. You are focusing on the wrong things, you have been writing entire chapters dedicated to fights or pill creation and theory, which is good in small doses. But there are no meaningful interactions, the last I remembered was the rat nest and a lot of chapters passed with nothing feeling important. I am inclined to drop the novel because I don't feel emotions while reading it. Hope this helps you find the writing direction for the novel to grow, if you think is needed.

gotta love the memes

is also such a generic issue and they don't realize that kills the interesting part of a plot, which is actually making an effort