camy011

The system is too OP. Would have been better if he gets a single random jutsu, stat, or % towards each release type for a small boost from each corpse. Why does it arbitrarily allow him to skip hand-signs without having to do any training to master/perfect each jutsu. The jutsu creation system is ridiculous, seemingly able to do anything without clearly defined limits or caveats. For example if it was limited to combining jutsu components for jutsu he already knows it would be less OP. MC is very arrogant and goes about things in a super obvious manner. He simultaneously doesn't care about the village allowing normal cannon plots while willing to desert yet expose himself to arbitrarily help the village without any reason/goal in mind. Why did he break out of prison instead of simply leaving a clone behind and using earth escape? The MC should have simply learned/created jutsu to help him in his primary means of gaining power, staying in contact with corpses while undetected. He could have infiltrated the various hidden villages and farmed skills without causing any stir or worked as an undertaker.

As someone who enjoyed the original novel the cheat came from I think this fanfic is great. So far it doesn't seem like a necessity to have read the original to enjoy this one either but decently worth checking out if you haven't already read it.

Series was renamed to "King Eye" but was originally called "King of Gods".

Seems like a bust to me. You created an isekai summoning story but almost immediately do a time-skip instead of any world building or power exploration and go on and on with meaningless conversations. The most interesting part of these kind of stories is the progression through learning about the system/skills/magic and world building and it is seemly absent all together from the start of the story.

If you received a fishing class would you immediately give up on leveling your class skills? After catching a normal fish in an ordinary zone would you extrapolate that since it was ordinary the one time you tried it would therefore always be ordinary. Even if ordinary fish were the best drop in an ordinary zone, wouldn't it still make sense to level up your skills for when you do have to cast in a special area? If the fishing pole can increase quality then logically any ordinary fish would gain a special quality to it which can be sold or eaten to help in some manner. It is a system novel with skills and stats except he neither has to grind his skills and the ability he gained is extraneous to the system without any reliance on his stats. It is completely irrational and badly written.

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This is a very flawed novel. There is no explanation for this kid possessing high school knowledge in elementary school as his success has nothing to do with him being a genius or doing any kind of hard work but is the result of his system cheat. His system doesn't even help him in obtaining such knowledge so this is just wish fulfillment by the author. This isn't really a system novel in the first place as there is no buildup or interaction around it, it is just used as an excuse for him to know all investment outcomes beforehand. The MC doesn't even attempt to hide his cheat ability and does so in as high profile manner as possible, taking interviews and doing it in front of an audience. Winning the lottery 8 out of 10 times makes his foreknowledge a statistical certainty whereas winning once for a large amount would at least give a plausible deniability of being lucky. Touring an investment company makes no sense as even entertaining the idea of being an employee, making money for other people is incredibly dumb. Betting millions of dollars with a minor through only verbal contract is perfectly normal behavior.

Has a profession, doesn't use it. Has a fishing skill, doesn't level it. Has a luck stat, doesn't increase it. Has mana and attack power stats, doesn't need them. There isn't even the interesting caveat of beating stuff up with a fishing pole.. nope, he uses a sword. This is just a generic wish fulfillment novel that doesn't engage with the initial premise at all beyond using it once to gain power and proceed to do whatever he wants. You could replace fishing with a gatcha, check-in, or treasure chest and it would make no difference to the story.

Except he makes no attempt at leveling up his fishing skill after 1 cast. Luck would logically be his main stat whereas it is completely ignored. The ice fruit doesn't even make use of his mana or have any logic to its damage. He has a divine fishing pole that doesn't require bate and increases drop quality so why isn't he even attempting to make use of it outside of these special maps?

This novel was a complete letdown. He basically surpasses the world in cultivation levels immediately without any struggle or exploration of his abilities on the way. The novel doesn't even build up the different levels and their differences for it to be meaningful. Characters intentionally act irrationally, presumably for comedic relief but it just comes off annoying.