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I don't understand if you don't really have the knowledge about the show then why would you make a fanfic about it why wouldn't you make a fan think about something you know more about
why didn't you Shadow clones to make it faster
sad fact that none of it's been fixed
barely just said it was on his face so how is it on his arm now
call him the president you don't call him leader this isn't China
hold on let me get this straight you ain't got time to write a chapter for the fic that you're writing but you got time to make another... help it makes sense..
this kind of thing does not need to be in bold like it's from the system that's his thoughts or a recap on what he did that's not the system so stop putting it in bold letters
why are you putting his thoughts and bold letters like that I don't understand that's not part of the ding ding from the system so why are you adding it in
him
this is one thing I never understood about stories why would somebody choose hard mode ever unless you were already Op as hell. I mean why make your life that much harder
why are you making it seem like there's some legendary battle
hey Natasha needs some love you know she didn't get none in the MCU so she can get it in all the fanfics plus she's hot as f***
he's not Victor von Doom at least not the original so why does he keep using his little catch phrase of no one will deny Doom or similar
how could he be iron Man he's not iron Man yet he's still making weapons for the military
late film level