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It was already crazy stealing the cup in the original timeline but this time around they did not do anything heroic. At least in the original, The snakes cheated with Snape while being bad actors, this time around they had to control themselves thanks to the pranks and earn their points.
This is lame. I was expecting him to protect Sasuke, it's pointless having him as the proctor otherwise...
It's a pretty good novel, currently my favorite HP fan fic. All of the low reviews are people nit picking things like Harry's full name being Hadrian, much like Tim or Timmy is often used by people named Timothy. Others like the guy complaining about his memories being sealed need to just read the novel for a few more chapters, it gets removed quickly. Now on to a proper review. The grammar and spelling is good, and it often updates daily. While I hated how Lily was convinced to send Harry to her family, other than that I like the characters, and I love to hate the characters when they do our Harry wrong! Lily realised how messed up things where and has been freaking out over it, so at least she knows what a mistake she made. Now James in this novel is a fool, he clearly never grew up from his Hogwarts years and ruined his relationship with Harry because he was a petty loser. The story has been good so far and the only thing I've disliked is how good Hary is with his knight training, even if he's super talented with it, with how competent he is as a young teen, even if wizards are stronger overall there is plenty of reason to train it on the side.
I don't think he's too twisted or anything like that just yet for the most part. It's normal in war for sacrifices to be made, only I don't find it very "light" side of him but rather grey. He's just overthinking everything with his plans, and he's acting like a Chinese novel main character in how they somehow understand everything going on with near zero information, only he's wrong 8/10 times with the info unlike how it works in most CN novels.
I forgot he existed.
Some ninjas in this world at pathetic. They need to learn to control their emotions!
I think it would depend on the situation but yeah there should be an advantage for outsiders like that as they should feel the difference if they look for it early on.
Would they let someone crazy like the MC buy guns though? He's got medical issues and has been very violent in the past.
The issue would be powering the game system or PC long term. Gas only lasts for so long so even if you have plenty time is limited. I'd probably raid a library at some point after it all started as not many people will have bothered to take books.
They are the main reason I stopped watching the show lol. I wanted a zombie show and it ended up being more about humans in the apocalypse with zombies on the side that are only a threat when the plot demands it.
This whole fight was poorly written and makes no sense. The lady cut in half a steel gun... Then magically teleports far enough away for him to toss the gun and pull out his rifle while she needs to sprint over again when she should be right on top of him. Then He's on the ground with her bitting his ear, he won't pull her off as it would rip his ear off yet he can casually stand up and beat her head in???
She's the only one who's going to be extremely embarrassed in that situation lol.
Damn, that's scary having an untrained kid panicking and shooting something near you on accident even if it all worked out lol.
Joel is a big dude and can easily carry a small girl like Sarah. This is not as bad a situation like if it was an adult sized person.
I wanted to make a joke about how this is racism but I'd assume the cops know something about the infection at this point.
Looks like Ron will get cucked at this rate.
I don't get why Lucas has not given up on his curse yet so Harry can be less problematic. His plan backfired.
This might be the first Gryffindor fic I've read tbh. Everyone seems to choose bird or snake.
The truth is we have no clue what his mind would be like as there are no real-life examples of this happening. It's free game for the author to choose how he wants it to work, it's fine to have your own opinion on it but we can't treat it like fact. I'd think he would retain his maturity from his past life, then regress a bit as his body's hormones will change things + when you spent your last 11 years as a kid you won't be maturing much if at all with the possibility of becoming more childish. People mature from new experiences and life lessons; adults can be childish. A part of why people mature is gaining independence, relationships, jobs, and other responsibilities. He had none of that for the most part. The dragons emotions also changed him some I'm sure even if he can suppress those emotions.
This is one of the better HP fics I've found. Writing quality is good and as expected so is the world background as it's based on HP. At this point in the story, it's finally getting to the books story with the first year starting if Harry was not born early in this AU. So I like the character design other than the Potter parents, but it's pointed out many times how crazy their choices have been so even they are ok IMO as no one is pretending the situation between them and Harry is normal. The main thing I dislike is the whole Knight Training thing Harry is doing, it's weird adding a new power system, and how quickly Harry has been improving with it after it was explained how long it normally takes and why it died out in favor of wizards. This just makes Harry OP on top of his magical ability that is on par of a top end auror.