SloAngel

Wasnt Rons gandmother a Black or smthing

tnx for the chapter, dont make it so dark and edgy at the start [img=recommend]

haha Headmaster, isnt he like a cleaner

i am not sure how to feel what he did with his emotions, couldnt he just lock them up somewhere in his mid, or used the key to process them. i think it was a little out of character what he did

hes such a bad friend to Tony, why not just leave if he got what he wanted from him. He doesnt do anything for Tony , he knows the future so why not tell him about the new element, or tell Tony about Natasha

thanks

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thanks fornthe chapter

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i like the idea you had for this work, the writing is good. Its too fast paced , you should add some more depth to your story, some stuff to fill in all the details. could be more descriptive of the use of his powers. i am looking forward to new chapters