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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

well good for you that you have a plan for the story :) now i dont quite remember why i quit this story but system/or lack of it was part of the reason xD thx for taking your time to answer these comments xD

well why would you want a system in the novel then? deafeats the whole point of having the system, some of the reasons you want to ignore a system is: 1. its evil 2. trying to take over your body 3. you simply cant do anything without it, when its upgrading 4. too lazy to keep up with all the data / make the Mc Op and a few others, i could keep going but who cares -_-

i know all that, but if you think about it then it makes no sense at all because its not like they would need many to destroy everything the humans had. i will leave it at that, the story is done so it is what it is.

i will ignore any Mc flaw after this chapter, when did Mc show any sign of wanting Dani? unless i missed something it was always her wanting him and not the other way? i get the fact that it just said that he was seduced by her, but he was never a person to be influenced like that, he did not have the same reaction to her as Mc did to his other woman with targaryen blood.

well it's been a while so i dont remember much of the story leading up to that chapter. if you think i'm talking about the king's dead then yeah it makes sense but i just remember the Mc being an idiot in terms of what's best for him and the Mercenary's. now if you dont agree thats fine :)

i agree with the pace, but that style of writing just felt jarring compared to how you have done it so far, that writing style was not the best choice(or maybe perspective). i still dont like anything about the masked lady.

known facts of Mc disciples: 1. they always find a way to carry a horse on their shoulders (if they cant fly) 2. they love to misunderstand. 3: killing grandmasters in 1 hit and burn them to ashes 4. tbd...

known facts of Mc disciples: 1. they always find a way to carry a horse on their shoulders 2. they love to misunderstand. 3: tbd....