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Guess the country's name in real world??
I actually added it later on. Thank you for the comment, I'll improve upon this. As for its importance, Maybe....
The story slowly builds up with portal hunting, slice of life and some mysterious dreams indicating something interesting. The battle scenes with the monsters and details of abilities adds some thrill. The start of the relationship between Krist and Ruby and him adjusting according to her children adds natural feel to it. Change of POV felt a bit add and unique.
The name of the book has been changed to "Cursed Blessings: Tales of twisted fates".
why is this chapter title in the middle and what's the meaning of this chapter 2 inside chapter 10
That's ok. I also use it to improve my grammer and some complex sentences. Try not to make it obvious.
Also, If you really want to review swap give me an honest one with explanation and I'll look at yours.
Not the right guy to review a novel from fantasy-female genre. But, the story is unique than all other reincarnation and system novel with mc transmigrating into a body and the original owner guiding and putting mission on her head. The writing is good with smoothly flowing dialogues. Too early to comment on the world development and story development but what is shown till now hints that some great story is definitely cooking.
If you ever review my book, give me an honest one with explanations. As long as it's not like 1-2 stars without any proper explanation, I'll take it.
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