StellarJade

Generals? Do you mean Admirals?

Kilo-Kilo Fruit not the Kage-Kage Fruit.

I've already forgotten, who is Shiro?

Standard MTL translation with inconsistent grammar. MC has no drive or will to really do anything. Not sure what you'd really expect from a chinese shop fanfiction.

Phone Worm... What? Den Den Mushi please.

For fucks sake Berries not Baileys!

Why is Hina here? It should be Gion, right?

Open the first chapter "Let me spend several paragraphs telling you about jews" What the fuck.

Polar Bear not Ice Bear

You don't get money in Heaven's Arena above floor 200. Instead you get free luxury food, gym & room.