Piggy
Hi. My names Piggy. I'm a pig.
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does anyone really say "Dad and mom" irl its usually just dad, mom
reminds me of billy elliot
he literally repeated realm twice…
wasnt it mystical?
hes a true edge lord
changing from first person to third is wild
idk why you gotta go the misogynistic route. is this all you could think about as a reply? you could have declared her as an alien or something along those lines as youve done before but you go the women route. what a disappointment
its a shame that not once plank was mentioned after he went to run for governor.
young man in early forties? thats a middle aged man!
isnt it supposed to be 'my' since its in first person. "Gaelixthox and my Dragons legion". or am i wrong and Jaehaerys speaks in third person
youre breaking the flow with full stops when you could just use commas. makes the writing more stiff and less natural but if this is what works best for you continue as is
the amount of times he said this already with similar wording
youve gotta say when theres a chance in pov or else people will get confused just break a line or something
shaggy and scooby is better than munnin and huginn. if a mc got ravens these are the two names writers always choose.