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Tumis

Tumis

Lv4

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2017-10-24 UnidoUnited Nations
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  • Tumis
    Tumis13 days ago
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    Not recommended , unless you're very bored. Seems like a summary of events, bloated a bit (Like other chinese novels), add some more things, and sewed together. At least the author researched things, some obscure things. Though as is with this genre, plagiarism is to be expected. Lots of it. And face-slapping is normal in this story; MC does/offer something, others reject him, MC does another thing, and others be like 'Damn, shouldn't provoke/reject him'. And dialogue is rare. As for harem... Well, its like a casual fling; no serious relationship yet. And don't expect detailed romance scenes. Chinese novel don't have it. Oh, and translation quality. They're readable. And based on other reviews, translator is doing some editing. Though will not be the same quality if the original is english. Some wordings are weird, it's more likely because the original version is like that. Like, lost in translation, but make sense in the original language kind of thing

  • Tumis
    Tumis18 days ago
    Respondeu a Tumis

    And am wondering why this marked as complete. The story is in the middle of a plot...

  • Tumis
    Tumis18 days ago
    Postado

    Interesting story. The MC reincarnate to a dying orphan who just started Hogwarts. Then doing jobs to earn money, doing magic things to improve self and progress through the year fast. Very fast-paced. Like telling summary of events throughout the year Minimal dialogue. Minimal interaction with other characters. Writing Quality is... sometimes you have to think what the paragraphs mean. Really needs an editor. Cause i don't think even AI will know what to do with the paragraphs. Well, at least better quality than some translation story on this website imo, but not by much. Tl;dr nice story development, very fast-paced story, but also include some character growth. Really need fixing sentences.

  • Tumis
    Tumisa month ago
    Comentou

    Upsidedown Mountain = Reverse Mountain

  • Tumis
    Tumisa month ago
    Postado

    This story is one of the better translated story. Story is about a transmigrated person who is nobody into Holywood *actor* superstar. And no cheat/system, though mc knows about many films, but not all details. Like, only some well-known movies you see on news. And no chinese-influence or something like that you usually common on this site. Character design is surprisingly well-done imo. MC slowly improves his acting capability and on his thinking through the movies he acted. Conversation and romance is also good. And no harem. Romance is progressing slowly, but not the slow-burn kind. MC is treating the women he dated like a person (maybe i over simpliefied it, but idk how to write about it). Anyway, Good story. Good translation. MC is progressing as a person, not fast, not slow. And most importantly, no cheat/system like others on this type of story. And the relationship between and conversation people is OK. Thx for reading this review. And sorry for mistakes, I'm learning to write

  • Tumis
    Tumis3 months ago
    Respondeu a Rimanovi

    Ohh, so that's why i find this story very familiar... Great combined story of Tanya's Youjo Senki and ATLA world. Hope you continue the story untill it's finished :)

  • Tumis
    Tumis3 months ago
    Postado

    This story is about someone transmigrated (or reincarnated, not sure) to Marvel world (dont know which version) and becomes a killer/hitman/assassin since young to survive childhood. And is a murder-hobo, though only to evil people and those against him. Currently is Highschool student, and the plot is about... Involving the hitman movie that can shoot curved bullets (forgot the tittle). Bad translation, but still readable. Just certain things/terms/skill translated to weird names. Like Curved-Bullet/shoot becomes Spear-Throwing (or something). Currently only interacts with Gwen and her family, and no spider-man (even peter parker) at the school he is attending (midtown high). Oh, and system. Can buy skills. Even copy other people abilities (Like the curved-bullet skills)

  • Tumis
    Tumis3 months ago
    Postado

    Well, in short, this story is the usual murder-hobo translated Chinese Novel, with the usual multiple *reaction* paragraphs to adds word-count. Also a system that will provides anything to MC, including but not limited to get character from another story, gacha, buying strengths, etc. Very well translated English; easy to read and understand. This review is written after reading Chapter 7.

  • Tumis
    Tumis3 months ago
    Comentou

    Wow, Captain and Second-in-Command of Marine Base report to MC's room first before preparing defenses against Pirate attacks... I understand that the Captain wants to protect MC, but really? And MC practically forced them to leave his room after arguments...