not bad, but your MC very imbalance for WMW.
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no plot, no feelings. statement of facts and one-sided massacre. even Leylin would be embarrassed at such a growth rate, how much is he there? JUST woke up and already the king, god, bender, Cheater.(((( Baka
yeah in Naruto vers this novell many interesting:
1.good story(not romantic)
2.good MC(not stupid)
3.4 Very good story telling, not so bored 🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😉😴😴😴😴😴😴😴
I don't wanna support to MC...🤔 i don't like love only one girl, but maybe this normally to all. and this "hero-antihero" like are very kid words in background at the start dialogue. (sorry English not my language.)