Shadow8ting

telekinetic not telepathic

Reincarnation Game (Book 1: Highschool DxD)by Crownborne

straight up copy of "Reincarnation Gane (Book 1: Highschool DxD)" by Crownborne over of FF

the only complaint that I have is that this amazing story is a word for word copy of "Reincarnation Game (Book 1: Highschool DxD)" by Crownborne from FF.

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this is a prime example of the author just being bad at writing his own character. The character gets told he is being reincarnated in DxD and he talks about how a person that stands out will get hunted down. When offered three wishes he proceeds to wish for: - A system, cliche but not a bad choice - The True Longinus, the most wanted sacred gear that all want either under their control or dead - And instant mastery of magic plus great potential for it, he had already painted the biggest target on his back this just made it worse. the character is then surprised when the three factions show up at his door and fight amongst themselves killing his family in the process. If you can read a fanfic with a premise this bad and ignore the bad grammar then I guess go ahead and read it.

Colombia not Columbia

the story is kinda all over the place with things happening randomly for no real logical reason, also not a story about a crow he stops being a crow in like the first two chapters and goes from being a crow to being able to takedown a passenger airplane and then beating Ironman 2 Ironman.

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