At this point her intelligence has been boosted so many times by batman included, and other smart heroes. How is she unable to make up a believable lie? Just author hyping batman.

I feel like you are being sarcastic, but i completely agree with your statement :D

As some1 who hasnt watched young justice, it's hard to follow what is going on.

Guess watching young justice is helpful, but it looks awful so I'll pass. Hopefully there are not too many instances of this happening

Great chapter. I usually hate if any1 besides MC is reincarnated, but this author knows whats up, first the old fossil is written great, now the system dude is also written good.

FYI, this child deletes negative reviews.

Hahaha, deleting negative reviews after getting owned in replies :D Hilarious dude without the stuff.

Hahaha, deleted my review after seeing my response to his own malding reply. Shameless, it should be illegal to delete negative reviews.--------- MC doesn't change his name and is still Jotou in a girls body. Not only is it a moronic name, it's a moronic male name in a females body. Disgusting trash. ------------------ Next is my response to his unhinged reply to me. Too bad I don't have picture of his comment, it was hilarious. TLDR He left a 500 word rant/mald about my comment :D----------- " What should I've named her? BrabbitX?" ??? How about Eletro101? :D What a stupid point you just made. How about give a girl a girls name? I don't think I'm asking for much. Want constructive criticism? Why did the detective go to a place where a velatos will probably spawn without any weapons, backup, experience or power? Like if velatos spawn or don't spawn, either way its got nothing to do with MC (as it's already established how velatos look). Why did she and MC go there? What could she possibly achieve by investigating a possible velatos? NOTHING. The MC had to fight and save her. All you did there was pull a cliche MC saves heroine situation, and worse is, you artificially made that situation by making your characters moro-nic. Name was just the last straw. Then again, even if it wasn't I still would have dropped, as I have no plans about reading about a Jotou in a yuri novel, if it was atleast an androgynous name then it would have been readable.

Hahaha, deleted my review after seeing my response to his own malding reply. Shameless, it should be illegal to delete negative reviews. MC doesn't change his name and is still Jotou in a girls body. Not only is it a moronic name, it's a moronic male name in a females body. Disgusting trash. Next is my response to his unhinged reply to me. Too bad I don't have picture of his comment, it was hilarious. TLDR He left a 500 word rant/mald about my comment :D " What should I've named her? BrabbitX?" ??? How about Eletro101? :D What a stupid point you just made. How about give a girl a girls name? I don't think I'm asking for much. Want constructive criticism? Why did the detective go to a place where a velatos will probably spawn without any weapons, backup, experience or power? Like if velatos spawn or don't spawn, either way its got nothing to do with MC (as it's already established how velatos look). Why did she and MC go there? What could she possibly achieve by investigating a possible velatos? NOTHING. The MC had to fight and save her. All you did there was pull a cliche MC saves heroine situation, and worse is, you artificially made that situation by making your characters moro-nic. Name was just the last straw. Then again, even if it wasn't I still would have dropped, as I have no plans about reading about a Jotou in a yuri novel, if it was atleast an androgynous name then it would have been readable.

Author deletes negative reviews after getting owned in a reply to his mald :D

Hahaha, deleted my review after seeing my response to his own malding reply. Shameless, it should be illegal to delete negative reviews. MC doesn't change his name and is still Jotou in a girls body. Not only is it a moronic name, it's a moronic male name in a females body. Disgusting trash. Next is my response to his unhinged reply to me. Too bad I don't have picture of his comment, it was hilarious. TLDR He left a 500 word rant/mald about my comment :D " What should I've named her? BrabbitX?" ??? How about Eletro101? :D What a stupid point you just made. How about give a girl a girls name? I don't think I'm asking for much. Want constructive criticism? Why did the detective go to a place where a velatos will probably spawn without any weapons, backup, experience or power? Like if velatos spawn or don't spawn, either way its got nothing to do with MC (as it's already established how velatos look). Why did she and MC go there? What could she possibly achieve by investigating a possible velatos? NOTHING. The MC had to fight and save her. All you did there was pull a cliche MC saves heroine situation, and worse is, you artificially made that situation by making your characters moro-nic. Name was just the last straw. Then again, even if it wasn't I still would have dropped, as I have no plans about reading about a Jotou in a yuri novel, if it was atleast an androgynous name then it would have been readable.

Lol, tell me you are mad without saying you are mad^^^^

" What should I've named her? BrabbitX?" ??? How about Eletro101? :D What a stupid point you just made. How about give a girl a girls name? I don't think I'm asking for much. Want constructive criticism? Why did the detective go to a place where a velatos will probably spawn without any weapons, backup, experience or power? Like if velatos spawn or don't spawn, either way its got nothing to do with MC (as it's already established how velatos look). Why did she and MC go there? What could she possibly achieve by investigating a possible velatos? NOTHING. The MC had to fight and save her. All you did there was pull a cliche MC saves heroine situation, and worse is, you artificially made that situation by making your characters moro-nic. Name was just the last straw. Then again, even if it wasn't I still would have dropped, as I have no plans about reading about a Jotou in a yuri novel, if it was atleast an androgynous name then it would have been readable.

true, i'm just mad you ruined the whole fanfic because of such a basic mistake. I just can't immerse myself in a story when every few paragraphs characters are changing their genders and I have to constantly correct it in my head. And it's such a simple thing (English also isn't my first language). Also the amount of Chinese translations that have this problem is unreal, so my tolerance for this is extremely low.

MC doesn't change his name and is still Jotou in a girls body. Not only is it a moronic name, it's a moronic male name in a females body. Disgusting trash.

skipping ahead to see if the name still stays JOTOU for a girl. if yes = drop if no = probably drop soon cuz it's moronic

so moronic. What was the great detectives plan in going to where a possible velatos was gonna spawn? Why not inform the police? Instead they went there and almost got killed. so moronic. Is it so hard to ask for authors not to be braindead?

I hope it's not full of politics, cuz I already hate politics, much less when I can barely understand what is being said here. So many grammatical errors, wrong words, unfinished sentences, sentences that make no sense...

:D You still don't get it.

Utter pure garbage fest. MC is utterly moronic beyond any help. 18 Chapters and there was maybe 1 chapter where I wasn't malding about how terribly stupid MC is. Honestly any1 rating this as 4+ stars is a paid actor and should be banned. honestly so much disgusting moronic stuff it's unreal. How can you make your MC so pathetic and stupid at the same time.