Sharyn

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I'm in love with this. Many details are very well thought through and there's depth to every character that gets introduced. I want it to continue so bad.

Oh yes had I know from the beginning what would haben, I wouldn't have done many things pff

I get that everything becomes a cliche pretty quickly, when it comes to writing. There are so many stories that nothing is completely new or unique and when consumers are into reincarnation stories (as an example) there will be more writers using that theme and quickly you have cliches that come with this setting.

So far this is really interesting. I can't really judge the stability of updates or the story updates. The grammar bothers me sometimes. There/their your/you're... there's a big difference between these, I don't get how people can mix them up.

There are a lot of common narratives in this one as well. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes that disrupt the flow for me. But I'm still reading it. So I definitely like it anyway. I'm here for some of the cliches too :D

pfff of course he be quick to judge... the same narritive over and over

lol