love reading new stories
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it's ok but claiming they are his like they are property/pets is a bit much i hope that there is character growth in this because if it's just him going i will not bow to anyone continuously it will get tiring quickly life isn't absolute it is give and take
I Love this story its the best mecha story I've read ever
besides the name and the "speech" part no idea what the rest means or is supposed to be?
it should be Asgard right now Olymplus?
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can you all imagine if this was made into anime like highschool dxd
personally I think u do the balancing pretty well so constructive criticism aside I'd ignore it
is there no more updates after it got voted through?
it wasn't specifically stated she was, it was stated she was acting strange but there wasn't enough of a reason to explain why she acted strange, she could of just been nervous around him because she secretly liked him and couldn't balance the emotions with the responsibility of being his maid
it's a little overkill with killing the maid who is 14 years old I get its unintended consequence but the way it is explained is a little callous even if she "was" part of the reason for the original body dying it's not like he regained memories proving she was part of it to justify lack of concern