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I am truly impressed. The improvement was definitely 9/10 when it comes to your writing. The pacing is a bit slow but it's pretty immersive. I like this. Keep it coming brother!
Regular reader here! I'm sure you'll do justice to Food Wars! I'm here only for that after all. Make sure to finish this as well please!
Pretty good so far, though it would be best if it's not too rushed. But well, hoping there would be at least some flashback on it so we weren't left hanging about some of the details.
Dude, just stick to your ideas. Some people like Hawaiian pizza and some people don't, including me. It's about preferences and opinions
5 stars for making me laugh with the prologue, and I know the reference. I love the dude's music! I didn't know people who watched Rudy existed here on the site, haha
I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!! I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!! I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!! I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!! I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!! I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!! I want you to continue this story dude, this is a masterpiece. I'll pray to God to lift up the curse!!!
This is--- I'm shocked! I'll pray to God to lift up your curse, Author-san.