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I would rate this higher, but its clearly AI/MTL with no proper edits. It's really bad, which is sad cause this is an amazing story I followed years ago. They can't even get names correct unfortunately which ruins a lot of the sentence structure
omg we back
It is a more Higher Wuxia World type historical story, that is just fun to read. Definitely a little on the raunchy side of things, but the original writer doe a great job describing all side characters and "wifus" and makes them actually matter and have substance. Fighting scenes are very well written which I think for most people should be a huge plus. The story itself isn't new, its a tale told many times throughout chinese wuxia story telling, but it exectued well here, though there are some who don't like harem novels, this novel can at least justify it. Also cultural this setting yes well off men general have more than 1 wife, you're reading a chinese novel. Translator so far has done a solid job hope this doesn't get dropped
There are some flaws to this story, but the core is interesting and honestly the side characters are good and interesting. More interesting than the main character at times which can be seen as the main flaw. That said because the family is written well, it at least creates a MC that has actual goals, that you can see progress, vs a lot of novels that side characters dont' matter, plot just repeats x30 times in different "realms". Also good foreshadowing for future plot lines. Hope this doesn't randomly get dropped but who knows.
Its a nice twist to the system genre, which actually benefits story building and character building. Characters and supporting case don't become 1 dimensional, they have life to them, and help drive the story forward. This is obviously more Slice of Life, which for me is a selling point with so much junk face slapping novels that repeat the same plot 1000x times, this story gives some feel good plot beats and the story progresses. Grammar needs some better edits, not hard to auto spell check some of these things.
This story is gold my friends. GOLDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Actual characters that actually communicate and have their own stories with growth. Also fun family stuff always a plus. The cheats/system is just a foil to help bridge the plots in a more fantasy way. Hope it gets picked up, not dropped, and they fix fastpass.
Actually a story that has character development, and some interesting premise. Add that with some actual character dialogue and interactions with some minor wish fulfillment and you got yourself a solid gem. Hope this get translated fully to the end.
Finally an novel with some actual interesting plot, and story lines, where characters are not all one dimensional. MC is at least interesting, and though there are some troupes still solid in execution so far. +1 for nice family (cause reading about some guy who's family all died is getting old, for current world climate cmon now).
Honestly, the comedy its good and even though some of the jokes get repeated, the writer puts them in the right place and makes it catchy. Is there face slapping? Yep! But it's done tastefully, and actually brings out interesting reactions instead of the picka face and omg nani. Also side characters have their own unique flavors and just enough to keep relationships and reactions and the world interesting and alive. And who can't like a good looking, but down to earth MC XD
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo