croooked

So,you on break?

The bish has "inter-spatial" storage but claims that mermaids don't exist.Why doesn't this bish just go and kill herself.

I thought it was only with the panda but you even using "them" to refer to Yang Li instead of "him" It makes the story soooo confusing.Please edit.

Why's the author using only plural pronouns where it should be singular

"them" thinking loopholes. "him" thinking loopholes.

The creature eyed the human and awaited "their" reaction. It should be:The creature ered the human and awaited "his" reaction. I think the author needs help with his usage of pronouns as it makes the story confusing.

Not "they" but "it'

Instead of using"they".you should use "it" since using they immediately creates confusion of being more than one person. "According to the Webster dictionary (***.webster.com) the pronoun 'it' can be used in reference to "a person or animal whose *** is unknown or disregarded"

Better yet,the company whose CEO he is is Qidi-If it were to be the case,I would hope he would fail and his company to collapse

hmm.....