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Reading all kind of novel including josei and shoujo Excluding shounen ai, yaoi, and yuri.
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Fan Fic from novel Lord of the People: Discount Artifact For Signing In at the Start I used this novel to practice my writing skill Bakalan ada beberapa perubahan disana-sini, Aku juga akan membuat beberapa original chapter yang memuat perspective atau reaksi warga sipil. Aku juga disini akan lebih mengeksplore personality karakter, terutama karakter-karakter penting dan juga Lord dari other territory Expect some mistakes and loopholes, because it's based on the original novel.
You know, I read it for a while, and keep skim over it because it's too cringe for me. I scroll some comment to find person with the same opinion as me.. But everyone keep talking about how good it is that it fell so fake. And boom, I found one person, I personally don't really mind with cliche story, but the way it flow is so wierd. Might be because it's an original story and the author is new.
Personally, I like this way. He's not OP yet, but have tendencies to be OP. Not a harem seeking yet, but have tendencies to do so. IMO, maybe the pace need to be quicken. There's some useless thing to say, something like CEO who keep busying himself with his paper. This kind of thing isn't won't change your story at all. So it best you can do some editing maybe? Ah I know it needs money or even time to do so. But it will make the story more enjoyable to read. Last thing, you're doing great. IDK how many original novel out there that I drop because the story isn't relatable or the plot is so forced that it makes you cringe. At least for now, I like how it progress, slice of life novel with harem romance in the future in modern world, with not so OP (yet) MC that doesn't depend too much on system.
Whenever there is a dialogue in the chapter, It's get cringe. Like how MC keep talking to himself like a kid, or when MC do some action to kill a beast but keep talking to himself like a madman. I can't get past 10 chapter. Please tell me if it will get better in the later chapter. Cause at this point, I can't read it cause it keep makes me cringe all the time and skip an amount of chapter
Exact copy of Beautiful CEO, The only difference is their name. WTF can you at least change the plot somehow, or change the character personality maybe, but no. Our author might be think that My Beautiful CEO is a great novel that He copy the exact same situation into this novel. Dont read it, dont waste your time, At least some crappy face slapping novel out there trying to be innovative by changing the plot somehow. But This!!!!!! Nope
Shi**y novel, crappy novel . Story about a man who get drag back and forth by a woman, and face slapping everyone around him, it's just your usual CN face slapping novel. But his sister is so annoying that I can't read pass 3 chapter. Find another book, not recommended. The translation is good btw, and the chapter is long
The concept is good. But, I get bored over time. MC get new talent, show it to the world, get famous, and go back to daily life, repeat. There's no character development at least until chapter 290~. MC still the same guy who lazy to do anything. Seriously, IDK what to enjoy in this novel. Comedy? just a few of them, Romance? non existence. Slice of life? Not realistic. I'd rather read face slapping cliche novel than this. But, I love the concept. Modern world kinda like rpg, no romance harem. If you have some recommendation like this kind of novel. Please tell me Especially if there is character development tag on it
It's just your typical second chance novel There's nothing special to make me read it more. Slow paced novel, with limited update. MC a bit pragmatic, until now, there isn't any candidate for main heroine yet Some scene really forced that it makes me cringe a lot. I keep getting 'it doesn't make sense' vibe from this MC. I forced myself to read it until the premium chapter, it's not worth my money. Everything I said is subjective and based on my experience while reading this novel. For me, it's not my cup of tea. I'll recommend Top Management (KR novel) it has better story