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Would have been better if she “wept in relief” or something.
“Accept”.👁️✌🏽
lol “eyes”.
Anything that has “Earth” and “human/terran” should be out. Lacks inclusion. Unless you plan on extermination of all non human sentients or their enslavement. Cause that’s what I would assume if I was a non-human meeting your government for the first time (Did they kill all non-humans).
Why use this name? If they going to have non-humans someday in the ranks then this is a dumb name.
You could write “flashback” if you going to do one. Cause if not a flashback then I am completely confused.
Sooo basically he is a knockoff mystique.
Dude dies before he finishes his education. His magic is trash. Get an adult who died and actually had skill. Or you get someone who at least lived through to adulthood. Snape, old lemon drop, Harry, Nevill, Hermoine, Greengrass, Grindlewald even Newt. But you choose the guy who dies while still in school. Didn’t have a chance to even broaden his knowledge.
Is the grammar devolving the more the story progresses?
At least not without a voice modulator
Just need the bloodline. That is what made Baki so op.
Why don’t they call the potter house elves? They should still be in hiding or waiting for him to call.
Wow! First time a novel actually made Snape show how much he actually cared for Harry! He may be a mean tsundera and biased as hell. But dude was willing to fall on the sword when it counted