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Good idea but poorly executed. This novel would be better if the author wrote it more slowly and with more details, to explain more about the characters'thought process. Some plots better not be added, for example that Batman thing in Demacia, that is cringe and not funny(for me and some people in the comments that I see). Anyway, keep on writing and practice, learn from mistakes I hope I will have a chance to read a great novel from you.
Slave in Noxus?? So it's before general Swain revolution and build Trifarix council??
Author.... for the plot... Do it!
What does the hero fear in this situation is the new crime lord. That he k ill them to take their business, like those gang war you know?