A long time reader of the genre. Because of reading so many novels I try to focus on reading well written stories bc there is nothing so annoying as a good story idea being ruined by bad writing
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this is such a strange chapter. I suppose it is heavily influenced by culture bc in the culture I grew up in friends are there to tell you the things you don't want to hear. Friends who can't do that are not real friends just people who you know a little bit better than others. If I were He Song I would be disappointed and not consider these people worth of investing too kuch in. I suppose this way of thinking does not fit the plot
rarely have I encountered a novel that was machine translated and edited so badly as this novel. Add to that a storyline that seems to depend on readers having no knowledge whatsoever, are unable to think logically and have the memory of a goldfish. If you as a reader don't have all 3 of those aspects then you're going to hate having started reading this novel.The idea behind the story is not bad and could have led to an interesting story about building a country. But the author did not care about logic because there are no explanations of decisions that look dumb or illogical. The author has no scientific knowledge, if you introduce scientific concepts from Earth in a fantasy setting then make sure that it makes sense (distillation is introduced but the author does not understand how or why it works so the distillery that is described has no way of working in reality. A distillery cannot be made of wood, it needs to be metal or glass because that can prevent alcohol containing gas from escaping the distillery, this author created one from wood.). And I haven't even mentioned the main character who doesn't seem to realize that some things should not be said out loud and some other things should be disguised a lot better for the mc to be able to live without worries. The only way such an mc would be able to survive is if he has an endless amount of plot armor to protect him from people exploiting all the dumb things he says and does
interesting story idea but after reading till chapter 25 I can already say with confidence that this interesting idea is ruined, first by a writer who does not know how to structure a story or write world building in 1 chapter and then contradict it in the next chapter, sometimes even the next sentence. And the second person who is ruining this interesting story idea is the translator. It is very obvious that a machine translator is used and that th editor does not have a hood English speaking or writing background. There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes that I'm surprised that the translator managed to trick webnovel.com in accepting this story. The translation quality is really bad, especially in the first 25 chapters (who in their right mind translates magical beast to warcraft? If you absolutely need to include in the name that these magical beast can be used as mounts than at least use a name with the word mount in it. Warcraft is a word that describes the art of war, it is what you learn in a military academy, the meaning of the word has nothing to do with magical beasts or mounts. And this is only the most annoying example in the first 25 chapters)
if it's just honey it's not a problem buy if the wound is left open for other animals and insects to feast it is a totally different problem
in real life we know that when you torture people the answers you get are not reliable bc torture tend to say yes to anything just to get away from the torture, even if it means incriminating themselves. Torture is the laziest solution to finding perpetrators bc you just torture the first person you see until they say yes
soap isn't that difficult to make... all soaps allow for fatty substance to be dissolved in water. The chemical reaction to do that is to combine an alkali (a lot of salts are alkali) with fat stuf. For instance fat of an animal combined with lye (potassium hydroxide or sodium hydroxide, can be made from wood) will result in soap. If you add flowers to the mixture of salt and lye and let the water evaporate what is left behind is soap.
it's things like this that make me not care about the mc, there is just far too much plot armor
this is the most comical part so far... (this author had not convinced me that any of the conversations, decisions from the mc, etc are believable at all. If I were living in this world then I wouldn't believe what is written in this novel to be possible or realistic. Not talking about his exp bubble cheat, I'm just talking about how the mc behaves in this world and how everyone is just going along with it without actually pushing back. Like in this part the director should have just said "there is a limit of 1 course per person, if you want to learn more than first finish your first choice course first. No ifs and buts, this is the decision")
lol, men can do it but when a lady does it...