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BLong6dComentouStolen Fic. Three to Backstep is the original title. He's even asking for money while stealing someone else's work lmao. Even deleted my review, the coward lmao
Chapter 9- BLong6dComentou
Stolen Fic. Three to Backstep is the original title. He's even asking for money while stealing someone else's work lmao
Chapter 01 - BLong12dRespondeu a ThrCrabPpl
copy of I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For on fanfiction
He shook off his sudden reflective mood and then gestured for her to follow him. "C'mon, let's make Mr. Religious Fornicator there more comfortable for the few moments he's still with us, then we can talk a little bit." He reached down and gripped the unconscious man and hefted him up by the back of his belt and half carried and half dragged him in towards the cargo hold of the ship. - BLong16dComentou
possibly broken with the room of requirements.
"Alright, feasible, but the book you eat gets destroyed! It's an exchange," Bailed notes. - BLong16dPostado
It's mostly just an AI-written story. I don't think there is an original paragraph in the whole thing. It's not even edited very well so it's just a bunch of long-winded and flowery language that does nothing to progress the story. Not worth the read unless you literally have nothing else to read. Even MTL translations are more readable than this crap
- BLong16dComentou
this long-winded AI-generated crap is really annoying to read. Can't you at least edit the story if you're not going to write it yourself? Put some effort into it at least.
Jaime watched in silent awe as Lord Greatjon's actions spoke volumes of his character—a man of honor and integrity, unafraid to stand up against injustice and cruelty, even in the face of overwhelming odds. In that moment, Jaime felt a renewed sense of respect for the Northern lord, knowing that he had chosen the right ally in their fight against the forces of darkness. - BLong2mthComentou
A huge red flag for a novel like this is when they take mind-altering perks or drawbacks. I've rarely seen them used well and it just seems like a really dumb choice even if your character was doing the chyoa for fun.
Lazing around is foreign to you; your sights are always set on the future. Unfortunately, you are willing to go very far indeed in pursuit of your goals. If you truly think kidnapping and impregnating a noble woman will fulfill your ambitions of having a child of prophecy, you certainly won't hesitate. And even if your goals are genuinely noble, there's a saying about the road to hell… - BLong4mthComentou
Wasn't this guy a reincarnation? Why is he acting like an idiot?
I spoke with a commanding authority, echoing through the dark abyss. "You would do well to remember where you stand, Nyx. Here, in the Underworld, I am the one who reigns supreme." As I spoke, the casual smirk on her face faltered, her body struggling to withstand the sheer power of my words. Yet, I remained steadfast, my divine energy unrelenting in its intensity. - BLong4mthRespondeu a Gian_Rojas_8903
Not when he copy-pasted the original mythology. He had the opportunity to mix and match from other mythologies and fiction and truly make something impressive. Still, when I read this chapter even with all its silly exposition I found myself severely disappointed. I don't even care if it was just a gimmick or adding some impressive architecture from Lord of the Rings or something but anything would have been better than what he gave us.
As I sat there, my eyes wide open with a newfound sense of determination, I couldn't help but feel a sense of awe wash over me. My realm lay before me, vast and sprawling, yet I felt an unshakeable sense of responsibility to defend it with all my might. A pledge formed in my heart, a vow to protect what was mine to the very end, as my mind expanded to new levels of sentience, fading into the endlessness of my newfound awareness. - BLong5mthComentou
I never understood why all the Chinese authors seem to have a fetish for looking like a girl. It's like they are all closet ladyboys.
After absorbing the soul ring, Zeng Yi experienced not only an increase in strength but also a change in his physique. His body's functions had significantly improved. He felt taller, and his previously bronzed skin turned fair and smooth. Combined with his handsome appearance and smooth, long black hair, he looked like a beautiful young girl rather than a boy. - BLong5mthComentou
I thought this was a continuation of the previous messages and I got nervous about the author's mental health.
Chapter 1: Why Don't You Just Die! _1 - BLong6mthRespondeu a BLong
I didn't mean for that to sound derogatory but I meant it to mean that they do no research to back up their genius protag.
"You see, Master Harry, the art of potion-making and the subtleties of chemistry are not so different," Nigel commented in his usual witty tone. "A dash of Pineapple juice in Vernon's orange juice might seem innocuous, but combine that with the addition of blue cheese to the Shepherd's Pie, and voilà! A culinary catastrophe for one, a delightful feast for others." - BLong6mthComentou
I like that this is like a real-world thing and not like a throwaway 'he's such a genius with impossible-to-understand plans' kind of story. I've seen so many authors try to write a smart protag and just fail utterly because they can't add anything intelligent to their writing.
"You see, Master Harry, the art of potion-making and the subtleties of chemistry are not so different," Nigel commented in his usual witty tone. "A dash of Pineapple juice in Vernon's orange juice might seem innocuous, but combine that with the addition of blue cheese to the Shepherd's Pie, and voilà! A culinary catastrophe for one, a delightful feast for others." - BLong6mthComentou
honestly just that is a superpower itself
Nigel's response was laced with dry humor. "Ah, the delight of discovery. Yes, every event, every detail, stored with the precision of a well-oiled library. Makes one wonder how you ever managed without it." - BLong6mthComentou
I need this system just for this function alone
"Master Harry, if you place the bacon on the skillet now, it will reach optimal crispness by the time the eggs are done," Nigel advised, his voice calm and measured in Harry's mind. "And do remember to lower the heat slightly. We wouldn't want to give your aunt any more reasons to critique your culinary skills." - BLong7mthComentou
abort! abort! abort!!
Consequences: The Warp and Chaos Gods gain access to the universe - BLong7mthRespondeu a LongSongGolden
I hope it didn't cause that means that the warp has extended into this reality.
When they faltered, Kaldor did not. He turned to face the other younger Jedi before a wall of white fire appeared in front of him. The wall surged forward like a wave and consumed the Jedi. The Master could barely hear a scream before it ended. When the flames disappeared, not even the corpse of the younger Jedi remained. - BLong7mthComentou
luna is the best girl! hands down
Luna Lovegood, Loony Lovegood