shadowfox9801
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shadowfox98014hComentouGlutton > Greed*
Kai had been fighting for a long time now. He had been fighting the day before, and now, ever since Glutton had shown up, he had been facing him head-on. Then, he had been going up against two of the main members from the Phoenix Gang.- shadowfox98016hComentou
Kia > Kai*
“I’ll be honest with you… I’m out of ideas,” Olivia said. “I guess all we can do now is wait for that help that Kia spoke about.” Olivia commented. “I just want to say that you did well, young one; this wasn’t your fault, it’s just we’re going up against a rather big ugly bastard.” - shadowfox980118hComentou
practical > partial *
The rest of her body had remained intact; this was a practical transformation of her Altered form, rather than a full one, but something she felt like she needed to win the fight. - shadowfox980118hComentou
Izzy*
Izzt was the one most at a loss, since her powers worked similar to the Hydra’s in a way. Her Altered form focused on strengthening part of her hairs to wrap around, pull, drag, and hit its target, but the Hydra’s head was far stronger than all of her power together. - shadowfox98012dComentou
Alterians*
"You looked troubled, so for a moment, I wanted to snap you out of it," Marcus answered. "Besides, I didn't realize they made you Algersians so weak. I know you don't rely on physical strength, but it wouldn't do you any harm to put some muscle on your body at some point. Anyway, what have you got on your mind? Is it that mage?" - shadowfox98012dComentou
hybris > hybrid
Yet strangely, it felt like there wasn't a hint of fear. In this situation, with a Hybris, with the Light Faction clan elders, and something now going on with the Demonic Faction area, why wasn't this person scared? What was he thinking in his mind? She was almost entranced by this person's actions, or lack of actions, and that's why when he finally made a move, she made sure to see every detail. - shadowfox98012dComentou
truely mean what you say*
"Plans don't always go to plan; this might have been something unexpected for you, and now you just need to improvise. If you truly say what you say, then you must stay in the Light Faction until this matter is sorted," Kawak ordered. - shadowfox98012dComentou
broken paragraph
could see that the sword had failed to pierce Mantis, instead, it had only pierced the ground. Cracking the foundation deeper underneath. - shadowfox98012dComentou
"from" is redundant
"You, aren't you from the Amir the vice principal of the Dark Faction Academy, what are you doing, what is the meaning of this!" Ricar asked. - shadowfox98013dComentou
openents >opponents
"Don't rule out the others yet; you never know. Maybe the Demon was just lucky with the level of openents he has gotten so far. He could just be lucky with this whole thing." - shadowfox98015dComentou
break > bread
In the Light Faction world, what happened to those that were unable to do anything but were forced to steal break to feed their starving family. Because they didn't follow the rules, and simply fought for their survival would they be executed as well. - shadowfox98015dComentou
sharply > hardly
It was the same on both hands, a strange weapon that was sharply used in fighting, if anything, it appeared as if it was something custom. - shadowfox98015dComentou
pagan > pagna
Loud cheers erupted again as the mirrors displayed everything. For a moment, it didn't feel like they were watching a fight, but an intense drama that was going on in the Pagan warrior world. - shadowfox98015dComentou
pagan > pagna
Those that were Pagan warriors knew this even more so, and for those that were lower ranking, the Clan heads were treated like royalty. No one would dare go up against them. - shadowfox98015dComentou
pagan > pagna
The regular citizens always lived in fear that they might disrespect a simple Pagan warrior and lose their life over it. Many, if they knew a Clan head was coming to visit, would just stay indoors for fear of angering a certain individual. - shadowfox98015dComentou
high as the sun in the sky?
"You should know, we don't take part in these things because there is a large difference between me and you. Right now, you might think that you are as high as the sky in the high, but you should know that Heaven exists above that sky." - shadowfox98017dRespondeu a Seldom
not a problem. I've seen the spelling in books before and looked it up about 10 years ago, just to make sure it wasn't a typo that editors missed.
Off to the side of the city, there was an area that was sectioned off. It was a coliseum of sorts. Once an area frequently used by the Moon Shield Clan, and was once the area where one of the martial arts tournaments was held. - shadowfox98019dRespondeu a The_archer1202
he's one of the Grand Magus...
"If you had, it's possible that the news could have spread to someone that Idore or the Noble Guild knew. Right now, while he thinks your memory has been removed, it's best to make our move." - shadowfox980110dRespondeu a Seldom
Coliseum and colosseum are both common spellings of the word referring to (1) the famous Roman amphitheater built in the first century A.D., and (2) any large amphitheater used for sports or other public events. Neither spelling is considered wrong in either use, but while the forms are often used interchangeably, the famous structure in Rome is now usually spelled Colosseum, and coliseum is generally reserved for other uses. Exceptions are easily found, however, and there is no consensus evident in popular usage.
Off to the side of the city, there was an area that was sectioned off. It was a coliseum of sorts. Once an area frequently used by the Moon Shield Clan, and was once the area where one of the martial arts tournaments was held.