I see your point. English isn't my native tongue either. But at the very least my shit is eligible

Reviewing again after reading chapter 116. The plot seems to have been put in the trailer behind the car at this point. The short time frame that the Mc is getting things done as well as countless chapters built on "feelings" is getting tenuous. Still recommend the story though. Hope author gets better at balancing these.

More accurately around 67 million Euros if you sold in November 2021

I'm sorry, I really did try to read this The storyline is pretty good but how TF is anyone reading this?! I have 10 year Olds with better Grammer . The story just doesn't flow.....it hurts just to read

Loving this story thus far but your time line is out of whack. Incredible hulk was 2008. And if he was 3 in 1995 then he would be 18 in 2010 and uneligible to join special forces, you need at least a year of training minimum before joining. But once again I'm loving everything

I can't tell whether the author can't transition or whether he just genuinely has bad Grammer. either way the story just doesn't flow in any shape or form. The first chapter was really good , but it seems like the quality keeps lowering after that .

Thank you for the apt description and tags sir/madam . Your cancer is greatly appreciated .................................................

not to nitpick author Sama but nasal was established in 58

I find myself blowing through the chapters everything [img=update]

excuse my ignorance 😅

Finally a Novel about actual crime . I been looking for one of these for as long as I can remember. Great characters and Premise . I only hope the author is of the No-Harem sect ......though I can't say I'd stop reading if he capped it at 2....Hope the realism stays true and I implore you to give it a try

Mass Release is always welcome [img=recommend]#TheUnstoppableWriter

Are we ever gonna find out the reward he got from creating his gang? Loving the story btw

Great story . A must Read !!!hrfgthtghgdvgdggfvgjjrfhtvbrfhtfbgdcnfdvhffbhthbggvbfgbgdvhtrvgrfvrdvhydvhffcbgfggfgbtfbhgfgjjuoofwwcjitegjjtcj. And no system or HAREM!!!!

I don't know what the funky is going on here . is this a story about Mathew and Lexi or Philip and Chester?? cos I'm 20 chapters in and so far 90% is Chester and Philip . I signed up for a military story (literally what I typed in the search bar ) . as cute as this is I've been misled and therefore disappointed in the bio. Great story though .

loving the story but it doesn't flow at all . The Grammer is also atrocious ,but if you can bare through all that then your golden..........

Premise seems great but the way the story is written is garbage

Lol 2nd

Lovely idea and premise .Translation could use some work in regards to grammer But please add the tag "system" Some people like myself like to steer clear of systems

This Deadpool cameo was Gold 🤣🤣