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VENGEANCE OF THE RETURNER

Autor: TheNeorav
Fantasy
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What is VENGEANCE OF THE RETURNER

Leia o romance VENGEANCE OF THE RETURNER escrito pelo autor TheNeorav publicado no WebNovel. After going through a dreadful dream. A college student named Nix wakes up finding his body drenched with sweat in a startle finding a message in front of him out of thin air.[Time shift successful]Fo...

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After going through a dreadful dream. A college student named Nix wakes up finding his body drenched with sweat in a startle finding a message in front of him out of thin air. [Time shift successful] Followed by the message he hears a voice in his head saying that he is from the past to help him. From there on begins his dreadful journey to find the origins of his past. **** Word counts 1.5k to 2.5k This is not a reincarnation story, dont expect memories of his past. *** ×Everyone in this world has a system. ×Unique System Instagram: TheNeorav Join Discord serve for more discussion and questions: https://discord.gg/UYJgNtyeh2

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Volume 1 :SIMULTANEOUS SUFFERING
Volume 2 :War of Chaos Mainland
Volume 3 :The Terrible Fate

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Author is very helpful in answering questions/comments troughout the story but this review is about the book not the author. Warning- some spoilers Im at chapter 50- sometimes the mc care about people(he kills his own faction guy for raping women) then 2 chapters later he force 20 people to suicide. One second he make a deal with the most cruel god to sacrifice one hundred souls then the next he want to save 4 prisoners.. This MC sooo wishy washy mentality its a joke Second he is constantly abandoned and hunted by everyone and everywhere he goes, in the first 30 chaps women spit on him, push his head into ground and whip him and then men pee on him...After he survive that he meet a women who told him she was watching everything and made a deal with her to help her lmao without even knowing anything about her nor the world he is in.. he trust to easy.. not to mention im at chapter 50 yet he doesnt even know how to use basic mana/how to fight /how to use his powers/how to use his system. Also EVERYONE he meets call him newbie because he is stupid and doesnt know anything yet he does 0 eFfort to learn anything. Sigh my conclusion great story but worst worst wordt most stupid frustrating mc possible

Wild_Bunni93
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FunWithUrMum
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A very good novel to pick up, Although there are a few grammar mistakes, i'm willing to look past that since english hard. The novel grabs your attention from chapter 1 and keeps you engaged all the way through but most importantly, this novel is home to the legendary Patrick. A man so legendary that his name will be passed down for centuries to come. As much as i would love to go on a essay long rant on the mega-chadliness that only makes up a fraction of Patrick's godly appeal. I feel it more important to bring up that this novel is a hidden gem that only gets better as you go on, even if it's partly due to Patrick.

Loliput
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Is there any harem or romance. If there is then this story won’t be for me I will read and se if there’s any harem And I hope it’s gore ....??.????.?.??

Zestal
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The book is okay. Pretty middle of the road. There are good points, like the world building however the flow feels wonky and a bit jumpy and the grammar whilst decent compared to some of the novels on here, alongside the flow make it pretty hard to read. But I do believe there is a good amount of potential, the author definitely needs some practice as it can be a little boring and the characters a bit odd. Like he's in India, why exactly is he called Nix? His friend Nagendra should never be that calm in an accident, no matter who you are there is always an initial panic and worry.

Kami_Sama_3718
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To be honest you had me when you introduced Shiva as Shigon😂😂 Anyway, keep up the good work! Also have you considered posting on Wattpad? cuz i feel they have a good amount of appreciable readers there

kunichan
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i like the story from the beginning because it has a lot of potential to be great. mc is a dumb and a trusting and it is fine for me since other author tend to do it for Character development. It Started go haywire around 30+ Chapter that i was forced to drop it. suddenly killing innocent for no reason getting mad killing them and urging them to suicide. a sudden 180 degree turn around in attitude . i am not hook with the authors explanation since from the beginning he was introduced as a moraly upright person and it will take a lot for him to change like that . it was forced or the author lacked the right way to present to us readers that it does not click to me the right way and it irks me. Well according to his monologue he was told by the draconians that you gain power with contract souls . I cannot remember though it might be i have been skipping the other chapters since i am getting irritated to his stupidity or bored. Still i am putting this to library probably dropping it. reason? I am not quite sure how others see anti hero is but for me anti hero are those who still follow the HERO line but still has like a morality . it is hard to explain and there is a clear line for psychopath, psychotic or cold protagonist which i label them as Evil MC most of the time unless given an outstanding background or story execution. kudos though for very good world development and interesting way explaining the stats. there are other bad things such us being a little dumb, sudden change of mc attitude like being domineering as if he got mental issue. a little bit trusting and making very bad decisions. according to author this will improve and the product will be a cold hearted, vengeful and selfish protagonist . if that is your cup of tea i highly recommend it to you

kiddeath1998
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Author I will give you the highest review that I can give, because not only did you write an interesting and amazing novel, but you also made me wish that, I didn't discover this novel until a year later so that I can binge read all the chapters.

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I give this 5 stars I usually didn't care about mistakes or grammar error. Once I enjoy reading story it excites me the most. Let's back to the story, traveling time, is like a dream come true if you have something you want to change. You can do it just a snap of your fingers. Even if you make a multiple mistakes you can repeat it again and again and change it until it was perfect. I'm excited to know more about your story keep up the good work author!

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Ziond
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@chapter 43. So far so good. If you can oerlook some grammatical errors, then this one is for you. My only concern is there is still no Lemon scene lol. He already met a succubus and a hot witch and still no H Scene cmon Dude You said there will be and H scene

Charlottee
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este romance é interessante o suficiente para prender sua atenção. MC evoluiu muito ao longo da história, quero ver até onde ele pode ir. sua mentalidade ainda está se adaptando e precisa mudar até que ele descubra o que quer ser / fazer. Recomendo que você leia a história, tenha paciência porque o MC comete erros, sim, ele não tem o conhecimento de seu passado, ele é apenas um iniciante em um novo mundo sem ninguém para ensiná-lo.

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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

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